Hooked on that girl

Mondays and Wednesdays
Those are the days I cannot wait for
For one reason
To see her to be close her once more
After that night we decided it was better if we stay friends
No she decided
I just went along with it ….

That laugh
When I hear that laugh… I can’t help but smile
When I catch her looking at me
When she smiles at me
Then there are those times
When she comes up behind me… and
Well I will let you think on that

She made me want to come
To have to come
Even when I was no longer playing
I’m hooked….
On what I don’t know… I may never know
But I’m hooked none the less
on the girl with the red hair and green eyes…

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i know i have not posted in a very long time i have been busy starting college but here it is for you

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Thank you

Thanks it means a lot to me that people connect with my stuff. I will for sure go look at some of your stuff. you should really check out some of my other poems i love feed back.

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I know what being in lobe

I know what being in lobe feels like.. Ive been in love with the same guy for five years.. Great poem! It would mean a lot if you went and checked out one of my poems!!


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)