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Through The Looking Glass into the dark treed forest
cease the dream
come with me
Enter the darkened night
wander lusting searches sight
to weigh the days
till dusk wakes dawn.
The Ancient ones await
amongst the jade treetops
bright jeweled stars
chrysanthemum fractal
scenes beam with
shimmer dance of night sky
fire glow in distant clearing
the time is near.
drumbeats meaning
the time is here
a ceremony undertaken
the grand vision
smoke stained eyes
the mind awakens
infinite waves of bliss
lick from the living breathing sea
the shore
eroding the deep chasm of time
a stained glass mandala
caught like a dream
like a
prism of dew wet web
lacing together
the continuum of time to space
"Smoked stained eyes/ The
"Smoked stained eyes/ The mind awakened" <3 I like this
**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**
Thank you
I appreciate your read.
The last stanza was fantasy,
The last stanza was fantasy, but it was dreamable. I liked it more.
My Secret River
Thank
you for your read!
"a stained glass mandala"
I liked that line, the rest felt like a disjointed dream to me, like I wasn't sure what was going on I was just goign with it until it was gone, and then that line stuck out and grounded the poem for me
Much Love
Ashley
Hmm
I would be dizzy inside this dream. :) Also, the opening lines kinda remind me of Rammstein's "Stripped" but not scary.
Du hast?
Who dosent love Rammstein
Love it
That is a trip. Reminds me of the effects psilocybin mushrooms have on the brain. When you can see the boundaries of time and space, man! You explained it well. Then when love hits you it's almost crippling. Reading this makes me want to go there again. The title also, trancendesitiny. Great!
Sorry
for that late thank you....
you picked up on exactly what I was putting down ...
thank you!