A LOVING EMBRACE

This lonely child,

the pain he has compiled

within his heart.

If only someone would impart

a loving embrace,

it would brighten his face - -

brighten his outlook.

His sorrow would be shook,

If only someone would impart

a loving embrace.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

a good poem with good idea tooo.. you write in intersting way and composition of words is also good and impressive...a meaningful poem... hope you go through my those poems which are not yet comment... because I am adding soon the critiques in my new book...welcome for sweet words