blush

alive is the wine
that reaches my lips,
blurring my eyes
and curving your hips.

hypnotic in heft
like a bust on cold stone,
it dreams as it drips
to erotic unknowns.

though pleasured you’re not
by my leisure afoot,
with your cigarettes lit
by love's cinders and soot

so much time in a frame
of a reference it's not,
so much lost without gain
that our reverence forgot

tongues twisted and taut
until nimbly numbed,
blush dripping and dropped
onto bodies succumbed

into shapes never seen,
like acrobats fused
by electrical shocks
and invisible screws.

but my bottle runs dry
just when lips shiver wet.
will the lightning strike twice,
on our love’s silhouette?

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SSmoothie's picture

Awsome write!

I read hypnotic as theft rather than heft I didn't like the connection with heifer ;) great write loved the wine the blush the rush the bestest part was the fused by electric shocks and invisible screws fricken awsome! Great work!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Fitzgerald's picture

What a wonderful poem this

What a wonderful poem this is.

hurtandlost's picture

“Your..words..give..birth..li

“Your..words..give..birth..like a rosemary”—Furler. hope to see more posts from you!

deepblue's picture

i second what hurtandlost said

I really hope to see more posts from you, great imagery, lively language, keep it up

backward_sunrise's picture

Wow, such a nice crowd. I

Wow, such a nice crowd. I really appreciate it. I used to write all the time in high school and college but tapered off to maybe one a year since then so I've been sort of like Haley's comet when it comes to productivity. To be honest, until now maybe 3 people had even ever seen something I've written so this is a big step for me. I feel like I'm flashing people through my computer ;)

deepblue's picture

well that would make *anyone*

well that would make *anyone* blush hah - we've all been there, takes courage to give it a try and writing only gets easier in time