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Your Power
I thought I could withstand
Your power over me
How captivating
How Enticing
You truly are
The grace of your movement
The air that so softly departs your lips as you speak
Your thoughts
I marval at the luxurious idea
That I
Being me
Might have the chance to know
A Mere portion of what you imagine
I however
Cannot help but to wonder:
Am I as lovely as you?
Very sweet and written with
Very sweet and written with such loving admiration. Almost sounds like how a child would look at a role model. You were lucky to have had a friend for a role model without having any insecurities develop. ...or maybe not. I hope not---just thought of that. ~peace~
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Thank you so much! Its funny
Thank you so much! Its funny how you said "how a child would look at a role model", because he has been my role model for years. There's no insecurities whatsoever, hopefully there never will be.(: <3
you're welcome---for me, this
you're welcome---for me, this made the entire poem awesome-"The air that so softly departs your lips as you speak"
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
I'm glad you liked that! I
I'm glad you liked that! I actually wasn't sure if I wanted to include that or not.