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Broken Girl
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Broken heart She cries at night
Always knowing why
Knowing what will make it stop
But unable to stop it
It's one person
The only one who can do it
But he can't really
Because he would only be pretending
Pretending to love some one
Who he doesn't love at all
So she stays broken
Knowing she will never be fixed
But she wont let it show
She'll lock t up
Deepin inside her broken heart
And no one see's it
If you know her like you say you do
You would see it in her eyes
And try to make her feel happiness
For she has not for so long
No one cares enough
To look deep enough to see
This girl is hurting
That her heart is shrinking
With every passng day
written 2005
very heart catchy poem with sweet idea ... every body is broken, specially we poets who are out of ourselves... and think for others.. its good poem and hope you like my work too
First there are a few typos. lines 14,15 and the last line are the ones I caught.
I did like the poem. I definatly liked the last half of it because I have been there. I am there. All in all, good job