Fruit of My Labor

Open my heart and let it grow

I’ll water it with my blood

Give it light with my soul

 

Starts out small and tender

Perfect, young, and innocent

Maturing deep within me

 

It will sprout from my chest

Wild and strong

Basking in its freedom

 

Its fruit will feed the hungry

Planting a seed in each and every heart

Lying dormant… in wait for love to start



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MilMan's picture

Fruit of My Labor

Outstanding... Such Beautiful Work. Touched By GOD. Stay Blessed.

AziVsH's picture

Thanks:)

Thank you again! 

AquarianMale's picture

This piece has incredible

This piece has incredible mind imagery and metaphors. I read it a dozen times or more. You are very descriptive and I am impressed far beyond my few words. You made my eyes open wide and heart beat faster reading what you write. Very nice, yes, very, very nice. Thank you

 

 

AziVsH's picture

Wow... thank you:)

Quite the compliment!! Thanks so much and I'm glad you liked it! I don't think I deserve this kinda praise, but I still appreciate it:) I'll be sure to stop by your profile and check out some of your poems when I get the chance. By the way, I love you profile picture. It's one of my favorite paintings of  medieval depictions. 

AquarianMale's picture

You are too modest.

You are too modest. Nonetheless, your poetry has "Unique Beauty," as I love Muhammad Algalad myself. My favorite is the: "Rose Fairy." I think you know what I mean? "Poetry is akin to slicing open your wrist and letting it bleed out onto the pages," and it is often not easy, sometimes seeing your emotions drift off like smoke across the Internet. Many times you just want to say - for what? Still, I hope you write more. Peace

AziVsH's picture

Well...

Too modest is better than too proud:) Thanks again, and yeah you’re right, when you put your soul into something, other people can sense it. I try to limit myself to only valuable contributions, which are few and far between. Hope to see more posts from you too though!