21 Grams

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Disappear, disappear; vanish from the face of the earth!
The young man screamed as he laid there in bed
The young man wished…
A bed overflowing with sorrow and blood
A bed overflowing with emptiness which he loved or so he thought

His memories disappeared, they ran away,
they were scared to submerge once again
He had buried them in his subconscious, but why!?

I mean they would have created a revolt of emotions
A tornado of wishes deeper and hotter than the core of the earth
These memories of love and happiness are screaming on top of buildings
Using microphones and speakers in concerts to be heard
You can hear them pounding on the clouded air!

He finally realized, he was blessed!

He released himself from pain and merged into happiness
He lost 21 grams while gaining a lifetime
His gain was greater than the loss as he laid there free!

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An impressive piece. You've

An impressive piece. You've captured a whole vent of emotions here