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Whatever Shall I Do?
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2009 I’ll just keep you trembling
Until nothing can be said or done
Until words become laughter and laughter a villain
Shacking from the past, the present, the pain
I’ll just keep you on thin ice until all you know is how to tip toe
I’ll just keep you trying and working and never give in
Never let go, not even a little bit
I’ll just keep you trembling with fear and desire for my love
Yeah
That’s what I’ll do
That’s exactly what I’ll do
that is horrible, i feel bad for the sad sack of shit. i see the reasoning, but am simply sad of the way it has to be. The poem was ok, definately really sad, but i didn't like the flow of it, so much negative energy, you need some whimsy in your life
Nicole.J.Burgesss
._. do you beat up men?
You made yourself sound vicious in this poem, like a spider about to pounce on a fly or something. Worked well to get that affect anyway, cause now I'm scared of you xD