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Regret
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2009 Once I wished I could quit you
Give you up and never look back
Now I wish I could need you
Put this love back on track
And once I thought I could have you
Perfectly for the rest of time
But now I feel I’ve lost you
That holding you was a crime
And always I’ve this notion
That we were meant to be
But now I feel deserted
As though you’ve never loved me
So be careful what you wish for
Because it might just come to pass
Once I wished I could quit you
And I’ve got my wish at last
I love the rhythm in the poem. Keep up the good work.
Joanna Grace Farmer
Remembering for the Sake of Not Forgetting
Cool poem, sorta reminds me of the dark is rising by mercury rev lol
ah, that is horibly sad, and as much as I love it, it is still horibly sad (insert weeping, slow then heavier) as i said though i do like it
"So be careful what you wish for
Because it might just come to pass
Once I wished I could quit you
And I’ve got my wish at last"
that is freakin cool.
love you as long as you don't evere say those things about me lol
moah!!!
Nicole.J.Burgesss
Your poem is universal in its depth of emmotion.
I liked the meter, could be a song if it had a melody attached...
We all have regret, let us hope they are somewhat balanced with joy.
peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot