And then there was a pianful miscarriage

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there was a time
there was a place
in which I did love without looking
in which I held you

needed to you
made you feel at home
there was a time
there was a moment
in which I desired you without perversion
in which I wanted you, respected you
in which you were a man to my eyes
there was a time
there was a place
which is no longer

 

 

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lol what you don't know can only hurt me

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Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

I love that you used the word perversion lol i dont remember the last time i saw that word in literature. I know what the poems about so I dont need to ask but I do like the way you put it together and the last line is half decent


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