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Secrets my body can't hide
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2006 Bruises round my neck, bruises round my thighs
Bruises every where, on everything
My heart, my mind, my body
Bruises painting my world brown and black and blue
Bruises caused by self defeat, by giving into you
That's one I missed Ms.
That's one I missed Ms. Bunny. Now you made me want watch it.
You like black,
I like blue,
We're one big bruise together,
A shiner for two,
Lend me your eye,
I'll give you my nose,
We can shine like a star,
From our head to our toes,
Others may read this,
And think something more,
Cause last night sleepwalking
You bumped into the door,
I raced up to help you
And fell flat on my ass,
I think maybe we need a therapist
Or a posture and poise class!
....
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
well, its not horrible, though I must say the only line I really liked was "Bruises caused by self defeat, by giving into you". i think it is mostly the word flow though, idea is good, maybe a revision perhaps????
Nicole.J.Burgesss