If, if, if

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If you had a mind that was even like mine
Or a heart to feel mine beat
If you had a dream to see mine
Or the skin to hold me in
If you had the balls to defeat mine
And the will to let me leave
If you had only what you love of me
And the sense to take the moment
If, if, if
If only you had loved me
If only you hadn't been wrong
If only you had the thoughts to out think mine
Then maybe we'd never feel the need to if again

 

 

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Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

good idea good usage of vocabulary lol, okay im just trying to sound smart....a little bit choppi at parts but that kinda good in this case because it kinda feels like their fragmented thoughts coming straight from your head. It seems...realistic, thats not the word I was looking for but you know what I mean


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