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2007 I just want to be a part
of that perosn I once knew
the one who showed me everything
who was real and soft and sweet
the person who held me
the person who hurt me
the person who I never see anymore
I just want to be a part of them
their past
"the person who I never see anymore"
again would be much better then anymore... other then that it was generally good, not in the lists of your best and sadly lack a title (shame on you) but not bad, perhaps a bit hurried. Not bus poetry to be sure?
Nicole.J.Burgesss