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2002
The earth she is my mother
And in her I will love
The wind shall be my brother
And I the morning dove
Now sleep away, sleep away
I'll wake you in the morn
When to this light I kiss the day
To love both rose and thorn
excellent. Punctuation would have been nice, but not necessary. Over all well written.
This is like a First Nations poem...very cool.
Great!!
Yes it has been changed but I think it was definately for the better, this is really a compliment since I don't often write good critiques for short poems, don't usually like them. But this one is really good, i am really proud.
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss