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You’re my folly

My muse's vice

You’re a comfy used sweater

At twenty times the price

Your kisses of fleece

Are warm to the skin

But your words of warmth

Chill deep within

I made a mistake

When I fell for you

Like I said, you’re my folly

And you know it too

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©11 April 2002 - 12:33am — running_with_rabbits
25 January 2003 - 4:03pm — Nicole.J.Burgess
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What!!!I am not your folly, i know nothing of this!!!Kidding this I really good, i actually do like this one a lot
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20 July 2002 - 7:35am — Josh Glasgow (not verified)
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I liked this poem. However, the last two lines. That I didn't enjoy. The rest was super.