what is there to lose?

What is there to lose?

When you have a strong emotion,

that which could fill the ocean,

and the commotion is enough to cause dramatic implosion,

give into the corrosion,

and cause an explosion,

because what is there to lose?

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Cari Albury's picture

Wow, I'm surprised no one's critiqued this. Um, I like it. I don't want to attack the repetitiveness of rhyming emotion. It's all how it plays out in your head. Anyways, good job, hun. I like it.