EDEN



ocean's lapping

melting duo

reclining

glowing

touching.....



his fingers

nimble

soothe.....

her spine

baby grand

anticipates

strephonade composed

skilled digit

traverses

lower....

nymphatic

static

dulcifies

intensifies....



two flowing forms

one breath

tide swells

as he

last moment

tensing

she arches

meeting....



breakers smash

energy

exhaled

thrust back

sea and sand part......



molten shapes

become

once more

dual lives

at rest

nestled

at Neptune's door.



Fran Hinkle

7/20/03

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wanted to write a shorter
version of an erotic tale.
And, actually, this one came to me as a result of one of my writing "warm-ups;"  plus, through
viewing others' poetry
which focused on the form
of fewer, more impactful
words, I got "inspired."
Oh yeah, I was listening
to a cd of "ocean tides."

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Starward's picture

This is exquitely erotic.

This is exquitely erotic.


Starward

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Maria Luana's picture

oh this was exqusitely written...and the words do have more impact...the short lines bring movement to the wole poem...i really liked it...and of course the theme...but theocean imagery was skillfully intertwined...can it be my theme song?? hehe...i am a fish girl after all...keep writing...stay strong