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PLEASE OH PLEASE
PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE HATE ME
Tell me you do.
Or at least have moved on
like I secretly hope you've done.
I didn't understand your meaning
until it was too late.
I had other emotions on my plate.
I hope she's pretty, kind, and funny
ultra cool and very loving.
Someone who renders my name incomplete
in your mind.
Make my name rhyme
in dirty limericks
in hatred cool, frothy, and thick.
But please don't love me
If you do
That makes one of us who does
Out of 2.
Ha ha I hate to rhyme well
Ha ha I hate to rhyme well all the time. I love the fact that it is free flow then a little rhyme to sweeten it here and there. Its a great write. dont touch it! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
That fact that....
the lines lack somewhat in flow, and rhyme do not take away from this....
It adds to it, and is ...or could be symbolic of the disjointed feeling you communicate to your reader. It something that has symbolic meaning...and it works here wonderfully. Well done