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Army
Marching through the undergrowth
a pair of men, strong are both
looking left and looking right
for any movement in the night
both watching eachothers back
incase of surprise attack
knowing this night might be
the last that they will ever see
I really like this and am a student at Douglas Anderson School of the arts for creative writing. I think your poem is amazing, the only critique i have is to maybe try free verse.
~Issabella