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A fallen fledgeling
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MATURE (suitable for ages 16+) I had a place
warm and safe
where food was plenty
and love was near.
Now I am so cold and distant
nothing is around me
something is rushing towards me
I wonder if it is soft
I wonder if it's mot...
It seems to me that your poem is good... but as a biginning of a poem not a poem to itself. But then maybe thats just me.