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Heart *shake shake shake*
An Etch-A-Sketch erased
It was only a scribble
And I went to the right
When I meant to go left
So I
*shake shake shake*
Leave no scribble trace
How was I to know
You liked scribbles
That went to the right
When they should have gone left?
*sigh*
Your turn
So You
*shake shake shake*
Time for new mistakes
I liked that a lot! Very nice metaphore. The *shake shake shake* was nice, something different. You don't see something like that in poetry very much. That's because it's hard to use that kind of writing without taking the attention away from the poem. Very well written.