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Despair
her heart pounds as they all stare
she wonders what they think but who cares
no one is nice they have no remorse
they have locked her away and she has no choice
they will let her out and hurt her when they have had a bad day
then when they are done they will lock her away
where she likes to hide is in the dark
until she hears the sound of the lark
she has tried to escape many times
but somhow they enter her mind
she is afraid and dont know how to get out
not to mention her sense of doubt
she is left there no one knowing who she is
everyone says she is just some dumb kid
she has no feeling they say
as they lauph and make fun day after day
she cant escape so she has made up her mind
she will pray to god one last time
dear god i know what you must think
that they are so strong and i am so weak
i know what im about t do is wrong
but i have been in this prision way to long
i know you will never to be able to forgive or forget
but i will do this with no regret
all i ask is you love me still
because if u dont no one will
she takes the knife to her pale wrist
the blood is coming drip drip
this is not fast enouph she crus in despair
she relizes she is not going anywhere
so she takes the knife and pluges it into her chest
no one was there she crys as she take her last breath.
By Brandy Diane Linkous
ouch! f n heartbreaking! veeerry good! i like the way you progress the hurt, and then finish it off. again, very good!
thank you
i appreciate you're kind words i couldn't figure out the password since i did this when i was 16 i still write to this day and find a great release in getting the words out but in 2015 i lost my dad and b4 he died i wrote him a poem and he heard it and i have forgotten what an escape and how true poetry is because you know trama and heart break tend to change us but thanks so much for looking and liking the poem it means the world to me