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Cursed Fate
Alive but unawake,
Blink of an eye and its too late,
Unable to feel with all this hate,
Nothing can make me concentrate,
Theres no need to complicate,
Don't act like you can relate,
The hatred in my eyes i dictate,
The walls that I create,
Do not under-estimate,
My life of hate i dedicate,
So I may rise to follow my fate,
May I slumber til I wake,
For my eternal reign of which i await
I love this. Very strong
I love this. Very strong words, and emotions inside this poem. Expresses your feeling very well. Good job, hope to see more work from you. :) Feel Free to check out my stuff as well, if you'd like.
-Elfy*
thanks
thank you for commenting on my poem ! :) i loove the feedback whether its good or bad and i in return will read all your poems and comment on the best :))
im just a teenager but ive been writing poetry since i started primary school , so its more of a talent than a subject to me. Other than that i love art and sport! My last year in school and hoping to travel to Japan because i always dreamt to :3 ( hopef
Your very welcome :) I'm the
Your very welcome :) I'm the same way lol. You don't have to read them all, there is a lot. And that's not even 1/4 of all of them, most arent posted lol. I'd love comments.
-Elfy*