To 'HOPE' , but 'DISAPPOINT'

No matter how hot the flames of hell burn,
They won't be able to cleanse your soul,
A small fragment of desire lies in what you fear to believe,
The depths of you are tainted,
Because of this bloody tempest,
Let it tear your blood stain soul to pieces,
And leave you shattered like broken glass glistening under the moonlight,
Beautiful but dangerous,
Endure the punishment,
and embrace what it made you today,
Breaking too many countless hearts,
Under the spell of the devil,
They continue to believe in the inevitable, like me,
The healed cuts and scars are each numbered,
Determining a certain moment in your past,
But one scar lies open, vulnerable to the darkness,
The blood and tears of that incident protudes out of it,
Spilling out the emotions of that day everytime we meet,
My eyes follow you unwillingly as you past me,
The wind carries you away , far away,
And the only thing that stays is your familiar smell,
The smell of the old summer days you caressed my face,
Whispering promises that you always kept,
Reminiscing about the pulse of your heart,
That no longer sychronises with mine,
Your heart that beats for only you,
But everytime you past by,
I pray that you would look at me,
And Recognise the eyes that saw through to your soul,
Recognise the lips that longs for your affection,
But you only see the heart that broke the link between us,
Because of my betrayal,
Everything healed but the reoccuring scar i left in your heart.
You knew i could fix US with a peck on the lips,
But just as unforgiving as you can be,
You left your heart broken,
So no one can mend it,
Including me.
But in the end if we cannot be,
We both suffer from love eternally,
So may we continue to live,
My tears dripping for your longing,
Your heart dripping from the pain,
May we once again die to meet again.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

one of my really personal poems, that i hesitated to post up ...

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im very interested

please help me understand more

alivebutunawake's picture

well..

this is really hard to explain .. how bout you be more specific in one area of the poem rather then the whole ? its easier that way ..


im just a teenager but ive been writing poetry since i started primary school , so its more of a talent than a subject to me. Other than that i love art and sport! My last year in school and hoping to travel to Japan because i always dreamt to :3 ( hopef

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to hope

bloody tempest, --- glean for me ---

osiriss-'s picture

i see

where you are getting now --- just took a change in time, excellent work

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thankyou

thanks , appreciate it alot


im just a teenager but ive been writing poetry since i started primary school , so its more of a talent than a subject to me. Other than that i love art and sport! My last year in school and hoping to travel to Japan because i always dreamt to :3 ( hopef

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Thanks for posting it , It

Thanks for posting it , It has a faimliar feel , amd flow . Keep writting and sharing ....


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