Remember us

I was here.

I walked.

I spoke.

I cried.

I learned.

I loved.

Loved my partner,

More than myself.

We created,

From very small thoughts.

We gave shape,

To time, and individual minds.

We grew.

Now,

I am gone.

Remember  us,

For what we created.

They hold my name.

My soul...

That has always been hers.

Music.

 

- Alejandro Bonfil

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sanctus's picture

Bravo! Brilliant write!

Bravo! Brilliant write!

SpiltMilk's picture

That's really deep. The short

That's really deep. The short sentences add much effect to the story of the piece, and I like it a lot. Great job best friend:)