Suicide.

I scream and cry, and then I die.

For the world seems infinitely stacked against I.

 

Tears for fears, cheers for leers.

To the grasp of death my life veers.

 

Devoid of light, no fleeting grasp.

Reality slips away; I gasp and gasp.

 

Hated vile, a corpse welcome to the pile.

Perhaps not in life but in death, I go the full mile.

 

Scorching, heat, a young body beat.

Cook in hell's furnace, a worthless piece of meat.

 

Shrapnel, nail, punishing hail.

Arrive below like packaged mail.

 

Reception, deception, join the ranks.

Sinners boil in metal tanks.

 

Abandoned, left, skin cleaved from flesh.

To eternal suffering your form comes fresh.

 

Lust, sin, killers within.

A corrupted soul you're thrown deep into the bin.

 

Heat, chrome, an everlasting home.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

After taking the longest and being written so late at night, I can confidently say this is my favourite work so far, enjoy :)

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My gosh. I'm tingling. This is a masterpiece in itself. To develop such a talent over night is something to thank (although not literally) the Heavens for. You have talent and potential. I could feel the emotion ( SEE) leaking out of the screen. It hit me like a ton of bricks. Keep up the work. You're going places... that I can assure you! Amazing job!


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