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Ebb and Flow

Shadows of light trickle down,

Illuminating her cherubic eyes,

Softly parting lips reveal a celestial sheen,

Born; a breeze only felt in the nearness of she,

The gentle ebb and flow of the vacancy between us,

Two; guided by the hands of emotive power,

Driven to desires beyond the realm of reality.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a short one. It's a decription of really looking at another's face and feeling that feeling in that moment for the first time.

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©28 February 2002 - 5:03am — adamrice
7 January 2007 - 9:10pm — Lisa Marie Canfield (not verified)
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a beautiful poem! well written. such expression is felt in this poem!

1 September 2006 - 2:46pm — Dagger Strife (not verified)
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This poem caught my interest so quickly. The words are music. You've got a gift, and the poem might have been short, but it was detailed and beautiful. keep it up, I'll be expecting more from you.

-Dagger

28 February 2002 - 6:45pm — Michelle Duvall (not verified)
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Do you remeber me? You have a way with words, let me tell you! I know the feeling you describe, and you do it well...(except it would be the other way around for me.)