Empty

I'm all alone

in a crowd,

on my own

fears have bowd.

Spotlights shine

to blind my eyes,

dark, hollow, empty line.

All alone a child cries.

Freedom, release, comfort, love

never near, never far.

Long ago I lost my glove

everything that

trust, laughter, dreams are.

They are missing, lost

will they return?

My shoulders droop,

my eyes fall shut,

doubts invade, hopes burn

I'm all alone, as I turn.


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Anthony Rosenberger's picture

You should finish thjis poem a little bit better, you have an amazing tallent and you should never let it down. Please keep writing, your poems are great. It's been a while, I know, but it's klike riding a bike, you really never forget. Keep up the good work.