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Golden Breath
Her breath is golden and the cherubs speak secrets
Her angel skin embodies calmness
She is tired drops of amber rain dripping on moonlit youth
Flattered by shadows and bathes in black springs
Lips tender with lustful tears dried to sinful eyes
Delicately showered by peddles of pink
Arms raised
Legs spread
Thighs kissed
Voices ambient and loving
They call to her shine
Wow
What a vibrant write! Great imagery and articulate creativity!
Very enjoyable..
Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
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Such amazing imagery here! a
Such amazing imagery here! a little deadpan at the end needs a little softening so as to not overtake the rest of the poem. Some great writing here. Well done!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
You were right about the end,
You were right about the end, it was lazy truthfully.. I made a small change to that. I usually would delete the whole thing. But, I miss who I was when this was written.