she sees through me

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she sees through me

into me

with a knowing spirit

she sees through me

to see if I love

 

she forgets

to remember

her dreams

her needs

they go where they wish

 

she sees through me

into me

with a knowing spirit

she sees through me

to see if I love

 

this form sweet verse

luminous narrative

urges me

to write the painted word

they fall from starved lips

 

she sees through me

into me

with a knowing spirit

she sees through me

to see if I love

 

instrument of action

depict the lavish epic

worthy of knowing

words that echo, and passion show

words to declare at length 

 

she sees through me

to see if I love

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nightlight1220's picture

Lovely...some women do forget

Lovely...some women do forget their own needs...(and some of us labeled "selfish")... ;-)

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Poetic_Eyes's picture

hi

well written and i did spin off wake a couple mins. i'll accredit you for the inspiration

9inety's picture

thank you

poetic_eyes

you are an amazing talent

peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot