her artistic style

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pleasure and delight
those resplendent lyrics that touched her
then beauty began a mutation
gored by the horns of accusation
its relic in solfeggio
something about being in denial

Do Re Mi Fa Sol La Ti Do
Do Re Mi Fa Sol La Ti Do
never to sing again
voice quivering there
furtive silence of love
wipes away every last smile

crying always corrupts the echoing
digression of worlds
wistful and idle
then the imperfection
and her expression is left unprotected
as she sees the loss of her artistic style

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The_Mav's picture

Ooh I love this! It's just

Ooh I love this! It's just darling! The doremi is cute!


If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream! 

SSmoothie's picture

Such a quirky and

Such a quirky and delightfully riveting piece! I really like it, it spoke to meon a higher level some how! Great stuff! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

9inety's picture

I read

your poem "Deleting myself" and couldn't do it justice with an adequate critque, somehow your poem inspired this, a reversal of fortune, so it seems to me...
Peace
Dylan
ps
thanks again for your imput on * Petals of Amaranthine*, don't know what to do with it next, but I see your points and they are appreciated very much


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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What's even more amazing do

What's even more amazing do re mi... Is one of my favourite songs! And you're welcome please feel free to give any input/insights on any of my works I too appreciate seeing with variant eyes :D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am