last act’s finale

Hyacinth garden

she was devotee to laughing
then to weeping
the content of her being

enter stage left
act one, scene one, in verse
she never needed to rehearse

make an appearance
marking the disappearance
in the real deal world
finds solace and yearnings
say the words too, say them to me
or leave me wondering

do I need aggressions
to be obligatory
can she engage my sympathy
or my transgressions
disguise your desires
without the vivid texture of her imagery

sugar coat the language
so not to be compelled
or repelled by the pleasures

lie for me
use your evocative prose
it is the aura of your mystery

make an impact
and then fade to black
to the last act’s finale

Author's Notes/Comments: 

time for an intermission
to let our sponsors
sell thier popcorn and candy

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Coryllus's picture

sugar coat the language

Some lines I envy.

SSmoothie's picture

wow! if this is not really

wow! if this is not really feeling it I am gobsmacked! You are one of the most amazing writers here. I guess I'd be content to just watch anything you scribble, but just because my eyes may see something of value that other's dont, doesnt make me easy, just not afraid to work my mind for the pleasure of vision :) hope your feeling inspired! Cheers SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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running_with_rabbits's picture

mmm pop corn and candy so in

mmm pop corn and candy

so in my head from now on whenever write a poem I am going to have this image of a dancer or actress alone on a stage with a single light on her. the dancer will dace to my feelings when I see her, and the actress will be doing a monologue of the poem in question at pen tip.

thank you for the share
it was a good one to read seems how I have not been to your page in ages!

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you should stop by more often

"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

running_with_rabbits's picture

I really should i just get so

I really should i just get so busy these days, I don't even get all my work posted when it's done :/

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