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you keep calling me back
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the sea inside of me aspiration, passionless and fruitless
inspiration, head full of white noise
determination, there is only wanting
I should have been asleep hours ago
you keep calling me back
in love, segregation shifts
as if patterns of resistance
grasping this sight, my eyes never close
for each vision a pearl, so precious, this pain is so sweet
you keep calling me back
to suffer the might of the night
itself an interruption in line
sweet caresses fade without your cadence
longing for a phrase to turn
you keep calling me back
an open sea haunts my brain
the winds have a woman's moan
a soft whiteness, sad on the bay
shifting whitecaps spite
you keep calling me back
Very beatiful work...kinda
Very beatiful work...kinda reminds me of something im going through...ill be sure to read more.
to suffer the might of the night
itself an interruption in line
sweet caresses fade without your cadence
longing for a phrase to turn
that stanza caught my attention too... ill be sure to read more. ^.^
...Artemorous-The-Forgotten...
Oh WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dylan,
This write is brilliant. I like how you kept repeating the lines, "you keep calling me back." It leaves the reader wanting more. I "re-read" this poem three times. It seemed to get better, with every "re-read." I'm awestruck by this write and at a loss for words. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it.
*S* Cynthia
Smile ... and the world will smile with you. - Author Cynthia Jones
Powerful! It will always call
Powerful! It will always call you back.