practice makes perfect

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murmur a word
that allows
desire in flight


to an expanded place
practice makes perfect
fires build a light


like hungry halogen
whispers in the night

while darkness
kneels low


memorizing
eyes turn to the soul


silken lashes softly close
lips quiver craving more

anticipate
again


heated breath
each like flickering flames
body craving
pleasure and pain


take another little piece

petals flowering
in the atmosphere
rivulets silently plead
until she wilts

in a moan


weakened

a dirty word begs

back arches
to that breaking point

into that abyss
into that submission

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myrataal's picture

Honest ...

simplicity
a word asking
for
home
and heart

Myra

Beavis's picture

Exquisitely written!

A true work of art. Every word is laden with passion and subtlety.

SSmoothie's picture

Breath takingly beautiful

My heart stood still; and hovered for a moment over the lines dripping with brilliance!!! Perfection! I love it!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

coffeewithleonardcohen's picture

darkness kneels low? Likes!

darkness kneels low? Likes!

9inety's picture

thanks

thanks


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot