of snow flakes

in a region of snow flakes

                        white with purity

this day of twirling and whirling

dancing upside down

floating like the voice of a whispering


around and around



only one ever

never another again


endowment forms

 devotion debates

cool gray clouds


who will sustain  the sky

the color of expanse

                              and of wind


cold caresses 




is passing...

                     until it is set down


to amass


the ground


Author's Notes/Comments: 

oh boy! more snow

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LadyToni-T's picture


Wonderful form of blank verse poetry. Great job! 

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thank you

is that what it is called?

to me i just scribble it down

what ever comes out

i leave for the reader to to determine what they like about the verse blank ot otherwise

welcome to postpoems





"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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Dylan, Ive been reading quite


Ive been reading quite a few of your poems this morning and I just wanted to tell you that youre absolutely brilliant. You are profound, intense, yet to the point. Excellent!

"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

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i've been called intense before... and profound too... but never ever has anyone told me that i get to the point... most of my family and friends think that if i was ever to be reincarnated as an automobile i'd come back as an old broken down rambler... get it ...

as for your wonderful praise i am flattered but no where near brilliant as you are...
just a working stiff from the old school who has always loved poetry
ever since summer school in 1971...
to bad i was such a lazy student... i just do this to be human.. the work i do is brutal... not whining just tired .
..but you on the other hand my friend are brilliant!!!
a real poets, poet...
poems of everyday life
touching snipets of modern women, with echoes about female identity, vibrant celebratory atmospheres that like real life change quickly with the shadows, like clouds that block the sun and then let it shine again. poems that portray the delicacy of the situations. and very modern realities: descriptions conjure up very realistic images of the real young women, not some television version no not like that, i mean real dammit! a person, a woman showing signs of strength; yet also coming to grips with vulnerabilities of identity a poets poet craving peace within the glare of society and its expectations...
like i said
a rambler


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot