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Hyacinth garden she said
a million ears
have heard Your name
but only i
hear your heart
she said
a billion eyes
have seen Your face
but only i
can make the case
she said
with passions aflame
arms that embrace
a mind of such innocent grace
she said
You and i
we are almost the same
the kiss and its pleasure
the way of the game
lashed to the mast
with one thing to grieve
she said
Your kiss
that knew no mercy
she said
Your kiss it slays me
i really like this one. it's powerful dude. the only wrong i can find is little things like punctuation, unless it's like that on purpose. but your spacing is genius!