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What Went Wrong?
A pain that hurts do bad
can't find the strengtho hide behind
thinking that you had it all
only to find out it was all lies,
The man of your dreams
your knight in shining armor
went from a prince to a frog
in the blink of a eye lid,
Tear of deciet
run from your eyes
wishing you'd wake up
wiping the sleep aside
If only it was true
if only it could be
but you and I bith know
that its not going to be,
Wish me the best
with the rough road ahead
all the sleepless nights
constant turning of my head
A heart once filled with love
now filled with pain
a nightmare thats not going to end
the lose of a true good friend
perfect... yeah its a good poem with rich idea and sweet composition of words... the way you did it is nice and heart feeling of course... so I can say that you are a good poet with sweet poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?