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Hello all, I am new to this site. I have posted a couple of poems today and i was wondering if anyone would be kind enough to give some feedback on them.

I am really hoping to find out if this is a place i can belong to

should i continue to post more poems or should i just leave it.

 

Many thanks

 

Yuri :)

My mother was a rainbow

My father turned her grey

they loved me like a sky lantern

they watched me fly away