MY GIRL DESTINY

  

 

 

all my life i held a dream
of a woman i would love

of course

she would be alluring
supple
a charming countenance
erudite, with an angelic face

her body
a muscular stretching willow
arching her legs over head
kissing her own
curving soft feet
a graceful contortionist
in confetti colored sparkle pantyhose
stretching towards me
silken hair draping a perfect symmetry
with spun sugar kisses
wafting the scent of vanilla
and candied vaporous breath
lips like cherry glistening lozenges

but

one never knows ones destiny

i met her
my girl destiny
and except for a faint look of languor and ruin
with a tinge of withering
she was without doubt unbearably titillating
with razor-thin blackened lips
mascara slits for eyes
hair pulled straight back
jet black
jelled like hardened licorice
with satanic blood rivulets
and pitch fork tattooed tits

a vice of lechery
a malefaction of moral turpitude
her ass scarred from orgiastic beatings
her anus became
like a large wrinkly mouth
resembling the face of a bullfrog
from pleasuring  herself with
tableware cutlery

her soul
a broken creel
suffering bouts of anxiety
like a weeping moon
having  been institutionalized
in Mother Marys Hell House
from a ghastly bout of parricide

her father,
a hobbling gloomish troll
while the dark veins of mother
ran through her soul
leaving little choice
but to dispatch
the parents
abandoning their corpses in the kitchen
like strewn litter

turned out
just my
kinda
girl

d
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s
t
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n
y

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eleven_eleven's picture

extremely annoying to even

extremely annoying to even attempt to read...so i didn't

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Usually if i dont like 

Usually if i dont like  someones work I dont say anything unless I'm cavilear about hurting others or perhaps think I can say something inteligently constructive, something you apperently dont know how to do ... you just  take a big stinky shit and walk away critique; how adorable.  Well we all have our detracrors; for example i just read your top poem Push and its sonicaly weak, boringly liniear , predictable in its cadance, and it terms of narrative content another hair brained declaration of your vain glorious self ....Now that could actually help you if you knew what to do with it. 


eleven_eleven's picture

that’s cute. i didn’t say it

that’s cute. i didn’t say it was bad, i said it’s impossible to read. Why not just post it normally? I mean...you do you, boo boo

zebrablack's picture

are you seeing a single

are you seeing a single vertical line with no breaks? Thats hoe i view my poem on my cell Its not the way it is written


PENKYCELBATRAN's picture

just in case

 

 

your poem looks something

like

this and

the

last words break in

let

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s, though that could be a cool ending

zebrablack's picture

well the poem is intended to

well the poem is intended to be in the shape of a syringe 


PENKYCELBATRAN's picture

oh oops

din't see it also i wasn't trying to  be rude just couldn't explain it.

zebrablack's picture

no problem Im geekless .. ive

no problem Im geekless .. ive been having tecnixacal peoblems  here and im perplexed ;(


zebrablack's picture

i never type my work out here

i never type my work out here either but it still switches into an incorrect format It just did as a matter of fact and then i hit tag and it went back 

Its interesting that it happens to othere and the web master dowesnt seem to care 


PENKYCELBATRAN's picture

what do you mean  

what do you mean

 

zebrablack's picture

some of my poems are comming

some of my poems are comming out as long vertical lines one letter at a time and i havent a clue why


PENKYCELBATRAN's picture

i don't know

i don't know it happend to me aswell but i just coppy my work in a pad app(when i'm on phone) and then copy it back on the site and it works, now i write everything in the app first.