Should I compare you to a summers night

Should I compare you to a summer's night?
Your eyes as dark as the pitch black sky
how they twinkle with joy
Your hair as black as the deep sea on a starless night,how it flows in the gentle breeze
your lips as soft as tulip flower petals and as
sweet as honey oh how I wish to taste them
Your hips sway seductivly and slowly side to side when you walk
like the tree branches blowing in the wind.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I got the idea to write a love sonnet from what william shakespeare wrote a long time ago. "should I compare thee to a summers day" I just changed the first line "should I compare you to a summers night" I put all the rest in my own words none of them are copied. It's my own poem.

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