Epigram On Ending Every Verb With "---Ing'

The gerund or the present participle

are easily used, but they really cripple

the line of verse; which, then, sounds weakly passive,

instead of the much stronger, robut, active.

And several in a poem can cause its slowing;

and that sounds tedious, as you are knowing.

To make the point seem lazy, I am making

it:  if you take it well, oh, just be taking.

 

 

Starward

 

[jlc]

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Written for a young poet as a rule of thumb for her choice of verbs.

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