The essence in 4 lines

 

 

I've bled my lastgive a fuck!

Forgotten - what feeling felt like;

No heart strings left - to cut

Now there's only fade - to numb...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

From the original poem 'Piles'For spinoza who found the gold in it and who I hope can find the gold in it again! Thank you for your support. Hugss 

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Drained vessels spill

Drained vessels spill nothing, emptied of what once surged fiercely. The echo of care fades into the distance, and in the hollow, only quiet lingers.

The edges dull as the pulse slows. Here, numbness is a quiet usurper, and the weight of feeling dissipates like smoke into still, unyielding air.


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Wow what a beautiful and

Wow what a beautiful and talented response laid perfectly poetically with resounding profundity! Many thanks blessings ss


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