Waiting? Advice

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Joined: 2013/03/28

If waiting: sleep well today.
Night will not come to you tomorrow either.
But... when it does?
you will wish you slept yesterday.

Author's Notes/Comments:

Sorry for the punctuation... I just dont know how to do it in the most efficient way.

I need pauses.

However, I am not that fond of poems that use punctuation as their defining element...

Punctuation suggestions appreciated.

thanks