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"The feelings you provoke"

Your eyes remind me of europe
your body reminds me of love
your skin reminds me of daytime
and our soul reminds me of us

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This was the first poem I wrote I ever kept so-to-say. I think the last line is a little cliche. let me know what you guys think. also, please leave feedback as I have recently dropped my blood relative and 99% of my friends and no longer have anyone to offer me constructive criticism.

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