The Haunted Body---A Revenge Tale Upon Amorality

My flesh told me I should notice the skull

beneath the skin of my face.  Sign of death,

it also threatened a slow agony

until the choked gasp of my final breath

would bring an end to my tomfoolery.

I had lived all my life, a drunken hellion;

and now my flesh declared its own rebellion

against my will.  Through long decades abused,

it mocked my willfulness as it refused

me comfort.  This was vengeance, after all,

it told me.  Now excruciating pain

(not felt so much by flesh as by the brain) 

climbs on my back.  My nerves begin their tenses

as shrieking anguish storm through all my senses. 

Toward Heaven, my fist:  why must I remain

wholly aware, alert, entirely sane?

My body says:  though this will not have passed

quickly, I am just first, and not the last.

Someone remind the medics:  no confusion

about this---it is outright Revolution.



Starward

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this in the midst of my own affliction's pain.  Mine is not due to substance abuse or thuggery, but bad or failing genetics and creeping old age.


The poem's first two lines were inspired by the second line of T. S. Eliot's poem, "Whispers Of Immortality."  The poem's title contains a parody of the title of Eliot's poem.

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