Open Your Eyes

I knew you long before I knew myself,
An ever-constant I can't seem to shake.
I learned from your great callousness and stealth,
Your always choosing to remain opaque –
Thus how the story continues to write.
Comforts of life you must be deprived of,
The void drops you deeper into your plight.
If you're asking me, all you need is love
To soothe and mend those bruises and scrapes,
Throw open the curtains and see the light.
Between us should be no bitter grapes,
No reason to scare and take sudden flight.
Let me, and I'll see you through your cries –
It's so easy to open your eyes.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

“Open Your Eyes” is the oldest selection here, written October 2004 about probably the only girl I have – or will ever have – one of those all-consuming crushes on. It was not a period of my life filled with a lot of happiness, but I believe the poem shows I had early promise. It was eventually released on "Remnants of a Former Life," a collection of unreleased older and "B-side" poems, in 2012.

 

 

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