timbrefall

 

Timbrefall

(the form that wasn’t meant to be)


Tyel’s assignment was simple

                  (or so they thought):

listen to the heartbeat of a dwarf star’s death

                 and translate it into verse.

 

The others heard strict pulses—

binary-perfect, measured like a metronome.

 

They tapped out hexameters

in sunstone and frost.

Their verses looped with celestial discipline,

a choreography of orbits.

 

But Tyel, half-asleep

and wholly unsure, heard something else.

 

A breath where there should’ve been beat.

A flutter in the silence.

He thought the star was sighing.

He thought its dying note was a hesitation.

 

So he wrote:

                    where stars falter,

                               the mind quickens.

                            a pause not absence,

                          but the shape of listening.


The verse hung strangely—

spaced like thought, not rhythm.

                 Irregular.  
                        Disobedient. 
But full of a sound

        no one had captured before.

 

The others called it a mistake. 
Then they tried to imitate it— and couldn’t.

 

Because it wasn’t the meter. 
It was timbre: the tone of longing,

the music between correctness and instinct.

 

So a new form was born—Timbrefall

built not on beats, but on resonance.

A verse form read aloud with uncertainty,

to invite the voice to break just slightly.

 

Tyel’s classmates took weeks

to understand what he had done.

The professors took lifetimes to forgive it.

 

 

 

 

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            But the stars— they hummed louder.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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