Jesus Loves You

Jesus loves you

If you love him.

He cries for you

If you do not.

Some father,

Because if I am in hell,

I guess it must be my fault.

I was born in hell,

So I suppose fault is my destiny.

My brother is bashing in the bird cages

And the birds are screaming.

He is mad and doesn’t know how to cope

The seed is flying around my room

I am ready to kill him.

He calms down and asks for forgiveness.

I calm down because

When I am done

I wont need to ask for forgiveness

And when Jesus cries for me,

I’ll be licking the flames

Because I do not.

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