quiet inner punishment

I was born      ...

                   I failed

I was a toddler ...

                   I failed

I began school  ...

                   I failed

I began puberty ...

                   I failed

I graduated

(from school)   ...

                   I failed



I married       ...

                   I failed

I bore children ...

                   I failed

I DIED          ...

                   I FAILED

I am a Grandma  ...

                   I succeeded

When I die

  for good...

             then what?



(ans, by jdc. "We will spend eternity together in bliss...

                The Ultimate Success.")

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written at a time where I had lost whatever self- esteem was left.

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